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Friday, July 26, 2019

My Poetry

The snow slowly melts into the gravel
And laze on the ground like a lazy koala. 
The blue sky moves in a circle around the world like the sun flies around the world to warm us up. The mountains stand so still that even if the mountains had eyes they would have to stay still and it is also what gives us sunrises and sunsets.
The bush’s make are give us oxygen just like trees.
The grass waved happly to distance.



3 comments:

  1. Hello Legend
    I like how you used descriptive language and used a simile.
    Make sure to have capital letters in the right place because the a in and is a capital letter and there is no full stop.
    Well done :)

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  3. Interesting Legend

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