Thursday, May 9, 2019
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Hi Legend
ReplyDeleteWell done for writing a successful poem with interesting words.
You should change ruching to rushing if thats what you meant.
Hello Legend I like how you used interesting words in your writing.Next time you could try to get rid of the red lines.your mission is to put in FULL STOP AT THE END LEGEND!!!!!!!!!!! OK
ReplyDeleteHi Legend, you have created a great image here to go with your writing. It seems as though your buddies have given you some wonderful feedback for this. Could you find it in your Google Drive and edit your work to make improvements. I can see you've done that with your graphing work above.
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